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    • WrCombsW
      WrCombs @Dashrender
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      @Dashrender said in Resume:

      @WrCombs said in Resume:

      @IRJ said in Resume:

      Technology Proficiency/Skills

      • Configuring and Managing Windows Server
      • Design and Configuration of Active Directory in Small Business Environment
      • System Support across multiple clients, operating systems, and networks
      • Windows Patching and support across multiple Windows operating systems
      • Network Design and Implementation with Ubiquity and Unifi network gear
      • Virtualization of servers and desktops
      • Help Desk support

      Professional Experience

      RDS (Retail Data Systems) http://www.rdspos.com/ 4/2018- Present

      Support Technician

      Skills used: Windows 10 , Windows Server 2019, RDP, NCR Aloha POS Software , Teamviewer, Bomgar , Backups, System Maintenance
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      • Managed and Delivered Software Deployments to remote systems
      • Performed Back-end Data Administration on software solution
      • Delivered Staff Training to customers
      • Implemented System upgrades and patches
      • Deployed and performed troubleshooting on receipt printers
      • Provided detailed documentation for internal use of IT department to help resolve common and uncommon issues.

      @Dashrender said in What Are You Doing Right Now:

      I missed the end result then.

      that's fair, see above

      yeah - the day I was sick - then when I came back, I was pulled in much lower to the thread and missed the resume itself.

      fair enough, that happens to the best of us.

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      • WrCombsW
        WrCombs
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        I'm getting ready to apply to a new company with a much better position.

        Here is my resume prior to sending this out to them .

        a3502106-c773-4fd0-9019-d89c52f8e2cd-image.png
        could you read through it and tell me what you think before I send this in to the hiring manager?

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          Kris_K @WrCombs
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          Your resume should be tailored to that specific job. Can't tell much without seeing the ad and job description. Who knows what the position you're going to apply for is and if it's a good match for the skills and experience you list.
          You should begin with fixing typos first though..

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          • WrCombsW
            WrCombs @Kris_K
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            @Kris_K said in Resume:

            Your resume should be tailored to that specific job. Can't tell much without seeing the ad and job description. Who knows what the position you're going to apply for is and if it's a good match for the skills and experience you list.
            You should begin with fixing typos first though..

            fixed the solutions typo.
            are there any other ones?

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            • ObsolesceO
              Obsolesce @WrCombs
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              @WrCombs said in Resume:

              @Kris_K said in Resume:

              Your resume should be tailored to that specific job. Can't tell much without seeing the ad and job description. Who knows what the position you're going to apply for is and if it's a good match for the skills and experience you list.
              You should begin with fixing typos first though..

              fixed the solutions typo.
              are there any other ones?

              personal labs isn't a proper noun, I wouldn't capitalize it unless you are referring to a product called "Personal Labs".

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              • WrCombsW
                WrCombs
                last edited by

                This is the Job I'm currently looking to apply to.

                https://www.linkedin.com/jobs/view/2183817413

                however, I'm sending my resume to multiple consulting firms / IT companies in the Local area with a message along the lines of

                I'm looking for a place in IT,  I've heard a lot about your company, Please review my resume and if you happen to have a position available in the future, please reach out to me 
                

                Obviously it'll be tailored ot the company, and wont be that vague.

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                • WrCombsW
                  WrCombs @Obsolesce
                  last edited by

                  @Obsolesce said in Resume:

                  @WrCombs said in Resume:

                  @Kris_K said in Resume:

                  Your resume should be tailored to that specific job. Can't tell much without seeing the ad and job description. Who knows what the position you're going to apply for is and if it's a good match for the skills and experience you list.
                  You should begin with fixing typos first though..

                  fixed the solutions typo.
                  are there any other ones?

                  personal labs isn't a proper noun, I wouldn't capitalize it unless you are referring to a product called "Personal Labs".

                  fixed that.

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                  • IRJI
                    IRJ @WrCombs
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                    @WrCombs said in Resume:

                    I'm getting ready to apply to a new company with a much better position.

                    Here is my resume prior to sending this out to them .

                    a3502106-c773-4fd0-9019-d89c52f8e2cd-image.png
                    could you read through it and tell me what you think before I send this in to the hiring manager?

                    I dislike using the phrase "personal lab" on the resume. It's great to test things in a lab and talk about that during the interview, but on your resume you should just list it as experience. Then if they ask about it in interviews you can tell them how you did it in your lab.

                    I also feel like it's scatter brained, and the order makes no sense. Put what you care to show off to your new job first on that list. If you put network devices as your first point, they are going to assume (rightly so) that it's your strongest topic. So you better know it inside and out.

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                      WrCombs
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                      updated 398cbd83-2eaf-4448-bf52-1fe47c95fb6e-image.png

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                      • IRJI
                        IRJ @WrCombs
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                        @WrCombs said in Resume:

                        updated 398cbd83-2eaf-4448-bf52-1fe47c95fb6e-image.png

                        Do you really want to highlight hardware installation as your main qualification?

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                          WrCombs @IRJ
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                          @IRJ said in Resume:

                          @WrCombs said in Resume:

                          updated 398cbd83-2eaf-4448-bf52-1fe47c95fb6e-image.png

                          Do you really want to highlight hardware installation as your main qualification?

                          why not?

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                          • JaredBuschJ
                            JaredBusch @WrCombs
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                            @WrCombs said in Resume:

                            @IRJ said in Resume:

                            @WrCombs said in Resume:

                            updated 398cbd83-2eaf-4448-bf52-1fe47c95fb6e-image.png

                            Do you really want to highlight hardware installation as your main qualification?

                            why not?

                            It is zero IT.

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                              WrCombs
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                              More like this? or

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                              • DustinB3403D
                                DustinB3403 @WrCombs
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                                @WrCombs just a nagging question by why doesn't your current employer have a redirect from http://rdspos.com to https://rdspos.com

                                Seems insane to leave the unsecured connection there.

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                                • DustinB3403D
                                  DustinB3403
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                                  Skills used I don't think is accurate. It might make more sense to say "Systems used" or "Operating Systems Supported"

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                                  • DustinB3403D
                                    DustinB3403
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                                    Bullet points should never end in a period mark. Example below


                                    Proficiency with operating systems listed below

                                    • Windows Server 2016, 2012 (R2), 2008
                                    • Windows 10, 8.1, 8 and 7
                                    • Mac OSX High Sierra

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                                    • DustinB3403D
                                      DustinB3403
                                      last edited by

                                      Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

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                                        IRJ @DustinB3403
                                        last edited by

                                        @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                        Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                                        I disagree

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                                        • IRJI
                                          IRJ
                                          last edited by

                                          Bullets should be strong statements, not just list OS versions

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                                          • DustinB3403D
                                            DustinB3403 @IRJ
                                            last edited by

                                            @IRJ said in Resume:

                                            @DustinB3403 said in Resume:

                                            Also bullet points should be concise, not full sentences. See the above example. Use the section descriptor to explain the bullet list if you must.

                                            I disagree

                                            Good for you, you've never seen a bullet point list. If you're writing complete sentences as bullet points you're doing something wrong.

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