Leaflet Review
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"Within the Essex County." A very pretentious county indeed. I'm guessing the word "area" used to follow there and was removed and the sentence was not updated.
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"Excess of 350+".
That's redundant. "Excess of 350" or "350+".
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@scottalanmiller said in Leaflet Review:
"Within the Essex County." A very pretentious county indeed. I'm guessing the word "area" used to follow there and was removed and the sentence was not updated.
I skipped over that one on purpose.
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@scottalanmiller Thanks Scott, should I take the "+" out of 350?
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@scottalanmiller said in Leaflet Review:
"Within the Essex County." A very pretentious county indeed. I'm guessing the word "area" used to follow there and was removed and the sentence was not updated.
Do you think this should be "located in the Essex County" rather then "Within"?
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@stuartjordan said in Leaflet Review:
@scottalanmiller said in Leaflet Review:
"Within the Essex County." A very pretentious county indeed. I'm guessing the word "area" used to follow there and was removed and the sentence was not updated.
Do you think this should be "located in the Essex County" rather then "Within"?
It's the "the" that is the issue.
Is it "Within Essex County" or is it "Withing the Essex County area"? The "the" only makes sense if the "area" or "region" is tacked on at the end.
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Thanks @JaredBusch -
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@scottalanmiller County is like the u.s equivalent to state I believe. So it would be like, "Located Within the Texas State" - that's what I'm trying to mean.
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@stuartjordan said in Leaflet Review:
@scottalanmiller County is like the u.s equivalent to state I believe. So it would be like, "Located Within the Texas State" - that's what I'm trying to mean.
Nobody here would ever say "located within the texas state". Drop that "the". It would be "located within the state of texas".
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Much Appreciated everyone, always good to get opinions and comments.
I'm quite happy with the design though, looks modern and fresh. -
I don't know how ads work where you are, but I would keep it way simpler. It looks like a ... how to say, it's like a chef brought you everything he found in his kitchen which might be somehow eatable, no matter what.
As for me, I wouldn't call a (small) company which offers phenomenal webdesign and (qualified) network security audits at the same time. I'm sure you're doing a really good job, but what is the core of your business? What are the top - let's say five - things people know your company for? Probably not webdesign
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@thwr Points taken on board, thanks thwr
