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    • scottalanmillerS
      scottalanmiller
      last edited by

      This second is organized oddly. I would change this up...

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      First, the left hand border is not consistent. Why is skills indented?

      Second, skills and certs are not part of professional experience, but are under that banner. Skills should be in its own section, probably up top ahead of experience. The cert(s) should be part of education and moved down below. They do not belong together - especially as your skills are the single biggest thing to highlight on your resume, and certs are the lowest priority to highlight.

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      • scottalanmillerS
        scottalanmiller
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        As a general rule, I like resumes for IT to be roughly like this....

        Top............................

        Skills
        Work Experience
        Other Experience
        Writing, Lecturing, Educating
        Big Ed (like University) from big to little (PhD > MBA > MX > BX > AX > "some")
        Small Ed (like classes and training)
        Certs from senior to junior
        Additional points of interest if highly relevant

        Bottom...........

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        • scottalanmillerS
          scottalanmiller
          last edited by

          If you had like an amazing cert like a CCIE but only an AA degree in Art History, sure make an exception and highlight certs above uni work. But in general, big formal ed gets the space above certs, but if you have lots of certs, certs might get more space.

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          • FredtxF
            Fredtx
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            @scottalanmiller
            How about the responsibilities? Do you see anything I should modify/change?

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            • scottalanmillerS
              scottalanmiller
              last edited by

              Way too much detail here...

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              Education should be distilled down quite a lot. For example, if you attend several colleges and do a lot of study, you'd only list one or two of them, not the lot. You would never list a single class, but since you have no degree from it, you need a line item to put there, so that is fine. But three bullet points of details from a class is way too much. Remove those. Especially as much of it is listing that the class was teaching bench and consumer tech rather than IT. All three bullet points detract rather than enhancing. Remove those completely, put the A+ down there and then focus on the parts above. That leaves more space to highlight the skills with its own section up top.

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              • scottalanmillerS
                scottalanmiller
                last edited by

                Skills is current a series of lists and single items, I'm not sure of the meaningfulness of the commas and periods within that section. Maybe break that out into a double wide bulleted list or something. Make those big items easier to read and find.

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                • FredtxF
                  Fredtx @scottalanmiller
                  last edited by

                  @scottalanmiller said in Resume Help:

                  Skills is current a series of lists and single items, I'm not sure of the meaningfulness of the commas and periods within that section. Maybe break that out into a double wide bulleted list or something. Make those big items easier to read and find.

                  Something like this?

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                  • scottalanmillerS
                    scottalanmiller @Fredtx
                    last edited by

                    @fredtx said in Resume Help:

                    @scottalanmiller said in Resume Help:

                    Skills is current a series of lists and single items, I'm not sure of the meaningfulness of the commas and periods within that section. Maybe break that out into a double wide bulleted list or something. Make those big items easier to read and find.

                    Something like this?

                    0_1518305421801_0a0d1087-d840-40db-bba7-ac56497d63c1-image.png

                    Yes, much better. Maybe two columns wide?

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                    • FredtxF
                      Fredtx
                      last edited by

                      Better?

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                      • scottalanmillerS
                        scottalanmiller
                        last edited by

                        Yes, that is much better, I think.

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                        • scottalanmillerS
                          scottalanmiller
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                          Citrix what? Citrix makes a lot of different products. XenApp, XenDesktop, XenServer, and so forth. Just Citrix doesn't tell us anything.

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                            • FredtxF
                              Fredtx
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                              updated.

                              https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OmIwV1c2_Lr9N_EUxUe_YEpVrhfaF0V_/view?usp=sharing

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